...Um, is something wrong with her right leg? Or did she just get bored and wrap it all up?

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Hmm... I do like the design of the clothes, but there are a lot of anatomical flaws. Her head is huge compared to her body, with no distinguishable jawline. Drawing her bangs lower and making the darker hair stick up less would probably help make her head look smaller and more proportionate. Her pose looks stiff and awkward, mostly because of her left(our right) leg-- positioning your leg like that is painful and best and impossible at worst. Turning the leg and foot more towards the viewer, similarly to the right leg, would look more natural. Doing that and putting her feet farther apart, I think, would improve it. (If you'd like, I can redline it to show you what I mean. >: My wording is baaaad)

lol, no i get what you said and I also know already how much this sucks, but it was simply made as a color ref for this character, since I didn't really have one in general, I have lots of problem with proportions, no matter how hard I try, so though I'm working on it, I still have a long way to go though...I reall didn't think her head was that bad >.> thanks for the critique

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she just got bored and wrapped it up, lol XD those are just ribbons~! never noticed them before? XD

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Ah, alright. If I may, I'd like to recommend something-- Andrew Loomis' books are very useful for learning proportions and such, and his books aren't too hard to come by. And you're quite welcome~ <:

lol, well, I'll have to see if I can try and find them then XD I actually suck at learning things from books (I'm a hands on learner better with an actual instructor than just reading samples), but I do have some random anatomy books at my house already. I just really can't make use of them, lmao XD

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Nope! She always wears the lab coat.

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lmao, still, they are usualyl partially visible under the labcoat XD ahahha~!

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