Looks nice, though the deviantart thing is too thick. Hinders view of the image.
lol, I'm not too sure what she plans to do with this, so for the time being, I don't want it to be something people in any way can steal. She may post it on her account, or give me the okay to post it all on mine, or even something else of the like. but since it's a commission, I'm being super careful